by Mommy And Me Jan 12, 2008
category :
Special events /
other poems
(okay this might be a bit confusing but all the words with " " around them is from one point of view and the ones with * * around them is from another point of view. if there is nothing around them. they are speaking together) |
Wow... |
I loved this. Speaks loudly as I will be in the Marines come June, this poem is one I shall remember for a long time and keep close. I love they way its worded, and I give you 5/5 and major props GREAT JOB! |
by Kayla
Oh my.. I've never read a poem like this one before. It was so unique, different, I loved it! Even the way it was wrote was unique! You did such a great job with this poem! I usually don't like poems about special events and all of that, but I enjoyed this one. You're a great author! Don't stop writing! 5/5 <3 <3 |