Your Hand in Mine (Monorhyme)

Wow. You are simply amazing with this form, you truly are. I'm envious. x] I find that sometimes with formed poetry, the flow can be off, but with this one that was not the case. You've managed to have a smooth flow the whole way through, and the emotions were beautifully written. :] Spectacular job. Overall: 5.5

- Steph.

I love it... this is so cute, and i adsolutly love these two lines

As candle lights shine
And we combine.

there a perfect ending, very very good... 5/5

I liked the vivid images, but it didn't really flow for me, but then again it mightve been the way I was reading it in my head.

Still really good, better then what I couldve done lol

That was stunning!!! Those monorhyme poems take sooo much work because its hard to make it flow and sound together when you are trying to rhyme EVERY line. Really well done this was beautiful

Aww cute
i liked the style
i've never heard of it before
very creative
nice job
5/5
kaila