Wow this was just beautiful. I loved the rhyme scheme and the imagery you created with your words. The words you choose to use fit perfectly with what you had to say. Wonderfully done *5/5*

Sometimes I think poems with the same rhyming on each line can sound tacky, and I know that is what this poem is written for, but I think this sounds great. You have a variety of words, and the story is sweet. You created good imagery and the flow was catchy and steady made by the short lines. I enjoyed this piece, great job. 5/5

Tammie

This is such a short romatic poem. i love it..
the was u made it so thoughtful in a short way is great. keep it up

Aww cute
i liked the style
i've never heard of it before
very creative
nice job
5/5
kaila

That was stunning!!! Those monorhyme poems take sooo much work because its hard to make it flow and sound together when you are trying to rhyme EVERY line. Really well done this was beautiful

I liked the vivid images, but it didn't really flow for me, but then again it mightve been the way I was reading it in my head.

Still really good, better then what I couldve done lol

I love it... this is so cute, and i adsolutly love these two lines

As candle lights shine
And we combine.

there a perfect ending, very very good... 5/5

Wow. You are simply amazing with this form, you truly are. I'm envious. x] I find that sometimes with formed poetry, the flow can be off, but with this one that was not the case. You've managed to have a smooth flow the whole way through, and the emotions were beautifully written. :] Spectacular job. Overall: 5.5

- Steph.