I am

by Spirit   Jan 12, 2008


I am
Fire, Wind, and Sleet
I like Hurricanes, and Tornadoes.
Terror, Denial, and Confusion are important to me.
I love when things are in disorder.
I loathe the spark of hope.
But one doesn't see that anymore.
I'm happy when I mess everything up.
I laugh when people runaway.
I get excited when I crush people's dreams.
This is me! I am Destruction.

I am
Light, Earth, and Water
I like Mountains, and Beaches.
Courage, Hope, and Strength are important to me.
I love when people's dreams come true.
I dislike it when people are in bad situations.
But somehow things always turn out for the best.
I'm happy when lovers find each other.
I smile at a child's first steps.
I'm excited when I make something from nothing.
This is me! I am Creation.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very original and truly interesting from the beginning to the end, greatly written poem. I like it a lot. Your descriptions are vivid and creative and whole idea for this poem is unique.
    The second stanza is my favorite.
    The ending of the whole piece is very effective, it rounds up the whole piece nicely.
    Greatly done!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    This is truly original and interesting poem I just have one suggestion. You used-I am- too many times and that left bad impression on me, I want to say this poem could have even more powerful atmosphere if you didn't start every line with I am, I love, I like...
    Anyway this is just my opinion and I really don't want to offend you.
    I enjoyed in this piece, I think that it needs few improves but all in all it has tone that keeps attention of the reader and I like the topic very much. Also you expressed emotions on a good way.

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    This is really a "one of a kind" poem... I love how you differ creation from destruction... =)
    it is just, how can i say it? different...and yet...special...powerful...and wonderful...
    This one surely goes into my favs...=))
    *take care*
    isabel

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