This is really a "one of a kind" poem... I love how you differ creation from destruction... =)
it is just, how can i say it? different...and yet...special...powerful...and wonderful...
This one surely goes into my favs...=))
*take care*
isabel

This is truly original and interesting poem I just have one suggestion. You used-I am- too many times and that left bad impression on me, I want to say this poem could have even more powerful atmosphere if you didn't start every line with I am, I love, I like...
Anyway this is just my opinion and I really don't want to offend you.
I enjoyed in this piece, I think that it needs few improves but all in all it has tone that keeps attention of the reader and I like the topic very much. Also you expressed emotions on a good way.

Very original and truly interesting from the beginning to the end, greatly written poem. I like it a lot. Your descriptions are vivid and creative and whole idea for this poem is unique.
The second stanza is my favorite.
The ending of the whole piece is very effective, it rounds up the whole piece nicely.
Greatly done!
5/5