Awe a very sweet poem.
and a beautiful write.
the rhyme was perfect and the flow
was almost flawless. :]
a great write. 5/5.

I'd wait for you until I die.

that is the most sweetest line in this poem
i think its amazing last line always sends someone of thinking. xxxxx

Wow that was filled of lovely words and it was so sweet! the message was actually powerful and very worded.. seems really sincere and perfectly well express 5/5

Good poem.
It flowed well and the imagery was clear.
Good job 5/5

Aww that was soo cute. it sounds a little like middleschool love. "id wait for you untill i die" was the most touching part in it i think.
5/5 !props!

"My heart is yours to have and hold.
You make me feel so good inside.
I'd wait for you until I die" I think this part is so sweet...i love this poem!..=)5/5

I could relate with the emotions you describe here. There is a certain someone I thought of while reading this and I'm certain I would wait for them also.

"I worked so hard to win your heart.
But you had mine right from the start."
^so true for me .. well said.

*5/5*

Very relatable piece. I love the way you ended it (the last line's my fave) because it's important to leave a lasting impression on the reader, you know? Very sweet. Great job. 5/5

For once, I can honestly say I don't think there is any way to improve this way. Each time the rhythm seemed a bit off, I reread it and it was fine. Very, very well written and I love the word choice. 5/5.

Oh the love in this poem was fantastic, your description and word choice was amazing, full credit to you, this was a magic piece, you sure have talent.

5/5 David

Awsome soo Awsome i cant say more cuz if i'll I Won't Give u the right describtion
Awsome 10/10

That was the cutest poem i have ever read i loved it...it kinda reminded me about the way i feel for this guy who isnt ready for a relationship...but ya newho i realli enjoyed readin this poem it was amazing

THIS POEM WAS GOOD. =]
ALRIGHT IT WAS GREAT!

NICE JOB!

Wonderful job
this poem is amazing
you've outdone yourself
it relates close to home for me
so I really really enjoyed it
plz keep writing
5/5
kaila

This is so beautiful =)

Wow hun if they don't wait i sure will
I can totally feel this poem i love it
*tear*

Awww, this is so sweet!!!!
This made me have a warm feeling in my heart ... awwwwwwwww *infinity aww*
*Cries*

Great poem, theres so much emotion within the words i love it 5/5 :) keep up the good writing

Aww, this is a very sweet poem. it kept my intrest through the whole thing. the flow was perfect also. i didnt see anthing wrong with this amazing piece. 5/5

My favourite line

My love for you is never changing.

and then in the last ...

I'd wait for you until I die.

these two are realy relates to me... nice work carry on.