A wish upon a star.

by LoveAddict   Jan 12, 2008


I wish upon a star
but it just will never
come true.

I wish upon a star
hoping you wont be
far. I dream for you
to come back, but all
of a sudden you lost
your track.

I wish upon a star
for everything to
be okay in life, but
whenever I wish that
it never comes out right.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    I love this poem. there is such an undieing potential here as well. the only line i didn't think quite fit was the last line... the words didn't quite fit in with the rest of the poem. maybe if you rea it over you may see a new set of words that will work with the flow a bit better

    <3 great work

    terra

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