I like this poem alot...great job.! keep up the good work!!
-Megan
P.S. thanx for the comment

I really liked your choice of words. :] This poem really caught my attention from start to finish; the flow was good and this was another well written piece. :] 5.5.

Man o man. beautiful wording. made me shudder! amazing. and thanx for commenting on my poem! <3

I like the rhymes alot :)
The poem shows alot of emotion to me :)
KEep up the good work :)

I like a lot this poem
cause u managed to describe the same feelings i had in certain moments of my life
congratulations,u have done a real good job
5/5 for sure
take care xxx

I love this poem. you wrote it so well and i know exactly how you were feeling,hold on babe and keep writing it will get better may take 20 + years but trust me it will get better.

I love it.

I loved the rhyming:)
It was really good.
Keep up the good work :D

Once again another great poem
you sure didn't disappoint
5/5 =]