by JUSTkeepFALLING Jan 12, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I thought the pain would start to die |
Another really good poem.. 5/5.. but here's me attempting criticism lol.. the soul/low and soul/goal .. it's good rhyming but idk just sounds funny.. good emotion and all that.. lol.. this might have been completely pointless.. |
by sage way
Heiz.. lol,, if you werent done yet,,you shouldnt have posted this poem.. |