Nightmare Demon's (Huitain)

by Cindy   Jan 12, 2008


Nightmare Demon's

Sorrows past keeps her from slumber
Screams of pain haunt her troubled sleep
Weakened soul consumed with fever
Constantly for her love she weeps
Her nightmare demon's slowly creep
Hiding his face behind a mask
She prays her soul he finds to keep
Erasing all pain from the past

A Huitain has 8 lines.

Each line has 8 syllables only.
Lines 1 and 3 should rhyme
Lines 2,4,5 and 7 should rhyme
Lines 6 and 8 should rhyme

Written By: Cynthia Graver Jan 12, 2008

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  • 16 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    An interesting form. I like this write. There is
    much pain behind each line which screams to
    be rescued..excellent work. Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Wow Cindy this is one of my favorites and I'm glad i found this wonderful piece of yours today. It is very well expressed and is something I can relate to. It is a nice bundle of emotions and I'm glad you were the one to pen it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Short, emtional, and creepy. This is a great piece of work. Well done 5/5.

    -Sarah A.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Never heard of a uitain before, but I think you did it very well. Great word choice and very deep.
    Loved reading this piece.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    A gut wrenching piece you have penned here dear.. full of sorrow and heartache. A truly beautiful poem, very well written.

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