Cindy,

This time I am the first to comment!
I love your poem, you chose a difficult form. The message is intensly sad, but it has a beauty to it as well.
Bravo on the poem, sweetheart.

Love Ingrid

Excellent and well written 5/5.

Oh gosh this poem was excellent but dreadfully sad, you are an awesome poet, no one can ever take that away from you. :)

5/5 david

Stunning...
5/5

Hey i love your poem. it explains alot about life as with depression

Quite powerful and excellently written from the beginning to the end. Whole poem is filled with amazing descriptions that created truly intense and vivid imagery.
The emotions are expressed in a great way and you did fantastic job with this form.
My favorite lines are:

- Her nightmare demon's slowly creep
Hiding his face behind a mask
She prays her soul he finds to keep
Erasing all pain from the past-
^^
Greatly expressed.

Keep up!

Thats a sad piece my dear may all your trouble vanish as soon as they came, xox sam

I tried to think of words to really describe this poem,I think REAL describes it the best,A poem from the heart,drawn from the deepest parts of our souls, are the ones that reach others the most. excellent write!

As usual there is a reason why you are on my favorites listing... a very nice write. you have again captured my attention with your words. beautiful

A Huitain has 8 lines.

Each line has 8 syllables only.
Lines 1 and 3 should rhyme
Lines 2,4,5 and 7 should rhyme
Lines 6 and 8 should rhyme

For me this will take some more time to learn, But your writing is beautiful and i shall love reading your poems. 5/5

I know i am late in commenting and i am sorry abt that, i guess i was just not able to gather guts to read the poem you posted before you went to hospital.

well i liked this poem as i like all of your poems....this one is spl too as once again you proved that you are no more a simple poet & ai admire the challenge you took and the way you gave a new direction to your poems...bravo dear.

all the best and take care

A gut wrenching piece you have penned here dear.. full of sorrow and heartache. A truly beautiful poem, very well written.

Never heard of a uitain before, but I think you did it very well. Great word choice and very deep.
Loved reading this piece.
Take care

Short, emtional, and creepy. This is a great piece of work. Well done 5/5.

-Sarah A.

Wow Cindy this is one of my favorites and I'm glad i found this wonderful piece of yours today. It is very well expressed and is something I can relate to. It is a nice bundle of emotions and I'm glad you were the one to pen it.

An interesting form. I like this write. There is
much pain behind each line which screams to
be rescued..excellent work. Take care