by bebe Jan 12, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I can still feel the piercing pain, |
by shanaynay
Good job! I can feel the emotion... It's great that you made it rhyme too. |
This poem is short yet has very strong meanings. |
by she
Wow,this is amazing,i can totally relate,hope this isn't true,but if it is im sorry,it's really good writing |