by Alexandra Jade Brewer Jan 12, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Fingers slowly intertwine |
by Kaila
Aww this is so cute so im wishing upon a star that this poem would come true for me on valentines day haha the last stanza was absolutly well amazing nice work |
Yea, im not sure about the loon part, lol, but its ok, it just makes the rhyming seemed a little forced, but it was still a pretty good poem, 5/5 |