The Ringing Sounds of Love

by Alexandra Jade Brewer   Jan 12, 2008


Ring...
Ring...
Pick up the phone
I just need to hear
That comforting tone
For to long a time
That voice was absent
Just used to the phone calls
That became so consistent
Begging and pleading
Please don't hang up
You help me to sleep
Since my hearts been corrupt
That ring of the phone
The hours on end
Paint a smile on my face
As I sense the love you send
I love you; I love you
*Kisses*; *Kisses*
You're the most amazing thing in my life
And its you I constantly miss
Goodnight my love
Sleep well tonight
Beep... beep
I hangs up and turn out the light

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Aww cute I loved the sound noises and everything thrown in here it was a really nice little aww poem haha nice work
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    The flow was very good, and the rhyming only seemed a little forced in one place, but i mean who doesnt have trouble rhyming sometimes. I liked the overall thought of it, and the want and the comfort. a well deserved 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by lish

    The flow of this poem was amazing i love it !
    'xxo

  • 16 years ago

    by TamborineMan

    Consistent flow, and an enjoyable read. However, I'm confused why you switched to 3rd person narrative at the end... surely it was not to offer up a secret confession since the 3rd person lines are no more revealing than the rest of the poem?... just a thought. Thanks for the read!

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