Consistent flow, and an enjoyable read. However, I'm confused why you switched to 3rd person narrative at the end... surely it was not to offer up a secret confession since the 3rd person lines are no more revealing than the rest of the poem?... just a thought. Thanks for the read!

The flow of this poem was amazing i love it !
'xxo

The flow was very good, and the rhyming only seemed a little forced in one place, but i mean who doesnt have trouble rhyming sometimes. I liked the overall thought of it, and the want and the comfort. a well deserved 5/5

Aww cute I loved the sound noises and everything thrown in here it was a really nice little aww poem haha nice work
5/5