Lolz it reminds me of Pirates of the Carribean...hehehe..but seriously speakin well thats the cruelty of life...life as for me will never be atleast close to perfect..good job once again..keep writtin...tc..

A fantastis metaphorical piece. I realy like this poem very much. 5/5

It is truly sad when a friendship is stopped by other people. If you know in your heart that is all it would ever be then there is nothing wrong with it. Some people like to make something very pure and turn it into something very nasty. I am sorry but I feel like you have written about your others, there is to strong of a connection there. It is heartbreaking people will not leave well enough alone. Such strong metaphors. You have painted such a beautiful poem here. I loved the analogy of pirates, because they steal so much and what better way to put a stolen friendship. I pray nothing but the best for you.

Failed or defunct friendships seem to be a theme of my personal experience. Reading this helps me look into several issues and deal with them in a very imaginative way, for that I am indebted to you.

Sad lovely poem!

I love your work and it really hits home to me most of it... sometimes with friends but sometimes with family relationships...

Poeple turn, change etc... sad reality....

Good piece!

Keep up the great poetry!

Danielle
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What a wonderful poem, sad but wonderful. Don't you think sometimes we just let the pirates win,either too tired or too afraid to battle once again?
You have a wonderful way with words.

This is amazing.

You are a extraoudinarily good writer.

Very Well Done You!