It Isn't Much (Collab)

Another amazing job. You and Amber make the most amazing collabs together, and I applaud you both on this fact. :] Right off the bat, the imagery in the first stanza caught my attention. The flow was flawless, and the emotions were strong. Fabulous job both of you! :] Overall: 5.5

-- Steph/

Well done again. This is another beautiful write. The words you chose and the emotion you captivate are perfect. I loved everything from the beginning to the end. You always are able to capture the reader.

Such a sweet poem. about wantin to love someone and givin a ring is a great topic for a poem

Walking along this path
To find the one I love.
Rose petals now falling
From the sky up above.

that was my fav part. its so amazong to find sum1 to b true bout there love

The first stanza is very image filled and was very beautiful to me. I could just imagine this happening in my mind as I read it.
I enjoyed the second stanza for it's vulnerability in the words, yet they are filled with such love asking this important question.
The third stanza is where I got thrown off though, honestly. The syllable count was shorter and it did not rhyme. This wrecked the lovely, steady flow that was throughout the first two stanzas for me. I think the content in this stanza is very sweet and the emotion is surely present, but as I said, the flow and rhyme is off here.
I love the last stanza most. It finished it off very well. It's so sweet and even though the last line could possibly be a bit too long, the flow caught back up and it was a lovely finish. Very heartfelt. Well done.

Tammie

Joe and Amber,

How sweet this love poem by the two of you!
I enjoyed reading it very much!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid