It Isn't Much[Collab]

by ABake   Jan 12, 2008


It Isn't Much (Collab)

Walking along this path
To find the one I love.
Rose petals now falling
From the sky up above.

I know it is not much,
But will you accept this ring?
I understand if you say no,
Just recognize how much bliss you bring.

When we first met,
My heart had melted.
I knew you where the one,
For me to make happy.

The one that I can trust,
Sweetheart, I give you my all
Promise you will love me,
And climb when I rise or catch me when I fall.

�© Copyright 2008 By: Italian Stallion and Amber

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Collaboration with Italian Stallion

Italian Stallion: http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=144412
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  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Aawwwz wat a cute poem! and different then the others ive read of yours! keep up the great work!

    <3 i love you silly

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    This was great! I read it on Italian Stallion's page also and I just loved it. I loved the imagery in the first stanza. It truly captured my attention and I wanted to read more. The emotions you described were real and easy for me to relate with. The flow was flawless and nothing seemed forced. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Great poem! Filled with emotion and very heartfelt...i loved it! I couldn't even tell that this was written by 2 different people.. and that means that you did a great job!keep it up! :D

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