Tears.

by October Rain   Jan 12, 2008


My eyes are so full of these tears
Filling my mouth with their salty taste.
Reminding me of pain i can't escape.
It's because you broke my heart.
Crushing it like it was nothing.
Will no one help me pick up the shattered pieces?
Or just help end my pain and suffering.
Now I've got nothing left in me.
I'm completely empty inside.
There's no joy or happiness.
Pain and tears are all i have left.
Never again will i be joyful.
All I'll ever feel is this misery
It's all because you broke my heart

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rin

    Touching and very emotional.. good job girl:3

  • 16 years ago

    by CountlessMoments

    I think your poem. its very touching and also the part when you said "Pain and tears is all i have left" wow that sounded really dramatic and powerful!

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    This is good - heartfelt and eloquent - but i would take out some of the words in the lines "Now I've got nothing left in me.
    I'm completely empty inside.
    There's no joy or happiness.
    Pain and tears are all i have left.
    Never again will i be joyful." or at least take out some periods - the choppiness conveys simple hopelessness, but is also makes a less pleasant read

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