Now this was much sadder. It sounds as though it was either about parents, or a signifigant other. Fighting is never good.
And I agree, sprinkles are good, we all need a little drama in our lives, but there is only so much we can take.
The last lines were my favorite.
5/5

I really like how you write your feelings out. Although it seems a little off-pace, the flow is very good. You're good at expressing your feelings, but this poem could've been a little more... direct. I saw the concept but it wasn't totally clear. It was a very good concept though. I really liked this poem a lot. And it shows your potential as a writer :) 5/5