OMG, that was amaizing, i loved it, you are so talented its unbeleivable, keep up the great work. 5/5

Wow that was so unbelievably good. Its one of my fav things I've ever read... Good job.

Wow jus cant stop readong it i mean wow
:) 5/5

I absolutely loved this one. Yet again one I would listen to. The emotion and meaning is very deep. Your word choice is perfect and it flows very well. Definate 5/5. A title suggestion from me is:
Love is my pain

...ok so maybe that's not the best but it sounds cool. lol This one is going in my faves. ^.^

Beautiful song.The emotions were heart-breaking yet incredible. Umm..I don't really know what else to say, just you're an amazing writer.Hope to read more from you later.
Keep writing,
Rado