by aDORKable x3 Jan 13, 2008
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Love, romance /
i love you
Love is a burning thing |
by damont
I haven't commented on your poems in a while but you reach alot of good points in this poem and i like it. it is though a bit confusing in the beginning is the first stanza a different poem? |
This was a beautiful poem dear. i love how you put it together. the rythem in the poem flowed through with out having many disruptions (but those are mostly cause of my father lol) but still its a great poem dear. <3 good work |