You really know how to express yourself,
this is a great poem.
And it's rhym's really well.
you really have talent.

This is terribly sad
I have felt like this many times
Its not fun at all
again im sorry for your pain
you are in my prayers
this poem is so easy to follow
and to relate with
wonderful write
5/5
kaila

The message specially the story was powerful and very emotional... all the words seems really has a great and deep feelings. there are some few lines that it was dedicated to me and its kinda very inspiring thoughts and very impressive as well... but i just noticed the flow was a bit off... but thought still the emotions of this poet keep shining 5/5