Who would ever want me?

by she   Jan 13, 2008


Bruised,abused,broken,and used,
left alone in the cold, no one wants me because ive already been tattered.
My innocence is stolen, but it's not my fault,
I told him no, he didn't listen,
I think I can finally say it wasn't not my fault,
he ripped me open a scarred my soul.
i'm sorry it happened,
i don't know what i did,but now no one can possibly ever want me,
for my body is scarred,
my heart broken,
and life with no meaning left,
so i lay here on the ground,unwanted,and longing for death.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Inevitable Dreamer

    This is a perfect poem. Very real in pain and sadness.

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Wow, this poem was absolutely amazing. I loved the feeling in it because like you, I used to be abused by my cousin I was younger. It was a scary part of my past. I used to think like you, that I would never find anyone to like me for me, not for what happened in the past. Anyway, I absolutely loved this. It had so much emotion in it. Although, I didn't really like the structure of it, maybe breaking it into stanzas or into one whole stanza, with the separate lines. I really loved it. Good job!! 5/5

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fear2love

    This poem is creepy, but tru, which kinda scares, cant stop reading it...!

  • 16 years ago

    by Destinys Pain

    Just amazing. don't ever believe that no one will want you. always have faith that there is someone out there that will love you for who you are

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Wow. this almost got me into tears. I understand exactly where you are coming from on this.
    although i think you should change the "b/c" to "because"
    and
    "my heart brocken"
    it shoule be
    "my heart broken"

    just to let you know.

    Very powerful!
    5/5

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