I dont know why but this poem draws me in, its very good, i like it alot =)

A wonderful job you have done on this piece..

"a phantom
thats really all you are
nobody notices each new scar"

I really enjoyed this little stanza.. the depth of expression was great!.. I think you have done a wonderful job on this unique little poem!

Wow i loved it
it wuz great
:]
5/5