Awww... darling! This poem was so sweet and you definitely got your point across. I could feel all of the love and happiness in this piece. I fell in love with it. I couldn't stop thinking about my beloved boyfriend Tyler whenever I read this poem. Not only can I relate to it, but I'm sure others will be able to relate to it as well. Your choice of words, beautiful! Great first write hun, please keep up the awesome job! You're going to be an amazing poet that will reach the top lists on this site someday. 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~