Comments : Peaceful Winds of a Sad Smile

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Your= you're in the first and the fourth stanza.
    Truly powerful poem, very emotional and deeply touching. Every stanza contains intense descriptions and feelings, and whole piece is waved with tones of sorrow and pain. Greatly written, with good flow from the beginning to the end.
    Truly fantastic piece.
    Greatly done 5/5 from me