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by Jake Jan 14, 2008 category : Love, romance / new love
When I walk down this road, I see you and me.. And what could be.. I want you to find me.. To just see.. How you feel about me.. And how I feel for you.. I am scared of what could be said.. Because you are all I see when I wake up from my sleep.. Your smile, your voice,your touch.. I just want to be something more.. More then this..
by ASPHYXIATED
First of all, Thank you for your comment. =D<3 Second of all, the poem. It seemed to be like one of those poems where you pause after every sentence. A different flow, but I liked it! I think you should try add a little more of a story, So we can see your train of thought. Goooood work.