Phantom Knight

by OHgreenman   Jan 14, 2008


Cast iron culdron heart; holds
An ember burning intensely within
Smoldering veins controlled
Deep beneath living skin

Distance decapitating devotion
While she battles her spector
Emotions tossed like a raging ocean
Yearning to be the protector

Shadows master a choreography
Nightly upon misty ceilings
Parading maidens life biography
Without considering feelings

Noble knight waits patiently
A comforting silhouette
Her life long appointee;
Lurking in the sunset

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  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Hullo there I must say i found your poem most enjoyable, very mysterious and even a little spooky. HAHA. Well written nice and poetic .
    Watch the spelling on cauldron

    welldone

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow...
    This poem is absolutely breathtaking, amazing from the first to the last line. I can't express how much I enjoyed reading this piece. Truly superbly written, with fantastic descriptions. You created amazing, so vivid imagery in every stanza and I could clearly imagine the whole poem unfolding in front of me. This is one of my favorites from you- flawless piece, I really like evrything about it.
    You did excellent job with rhymes, creating perfect flow.
    This piece is also very creative and unique, different from anything I've read before.
    My favorite stanza is:

    - Shadows master a choreography
    Nightly upon misty ceilings
    Parading maidens life biography
    Without considering feelings-
    ^^^
    Just wow! Sp powerful!

    Excellently done!

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