Wow...
This poem is absolutely breathtaking, amazing from the first to the last line. I can't express how much I enjoyed reading this piece. Truly superbly written, with fantastic descriptions. You created amazing, so vivid imagery in every stanza and I could clearly imagine the whole poem unfolding in front of me. This is one of my favorites from you- flawless piece, I really like evrything about it.
You did excellent job with rhymes, creating perfect flow.
This piece is also very creative and unique, different from anything I've read before.
My favorite stanza is:

- Shadows master a choreography
Nightly upon misty ceilings
Parading maidens life biography
Without considering feelings-
^^^
Just wow! Sp powerful!

Excellently done!

Hullo there I must say i found your poem most enjoyable, very mysterious and even a little spooky. HAHA. Well written nice and poetic .
Watch the spelling on cauldron

welldone

Grant