Thoughts

by 1Mistake   Jan 14, 2008


These thoughts running threw my head,
I lay awake silent, in my bed.

I turned on my favorite song,
Wishing that you wasn't gone.

Holding on to my teddy real tight,
Wondering how I'm going to make it threw the night.

A single tear ran down my cheek,
I hate myself for being so weak.

I try to be strong,
but the pain urges on.

My heart feels heavy as led,
I sit here wishing I was dead.

How long must I stay awake?
When the morning light is about to break?

These thoughts running threw my head.
I lay awake silent in my bed.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Amazing poem! altho it could prbly be a little better, the rhyme sounded kinda forced but i still love it all the same, i can feel the emotion in it, n can relate 2 it! keep up the great work.. 5/5
    love love xx

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Yea i know how this goes.
    this poem seemed a bit forced and needs some working on. BUT the emotions in this poem was incredible. so for that reason i ma givin this a 5. not many poems feel this strong when its seems kinda rocky. ya know?

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