Yea i know how this goes.
this poem seemed a bit forced and needs some working on. BUT the emotions in this poem was incredible. so for that reason i ma givin this a 5. not many poems feel this strong when its seems kinda rocky. ya know?

Amazing poem! altho it could prbly be a little better, the rhyme sounded kinda forced but i still love it all the same, i can feel the emotion in it, n can relate 2 it! keep up the great work.. 5/5
love love xx