Comments : I've Found My Mr. Perfect

  • 16 years ago

    by dora

    I loved this. this was one of the best love poems ive read tonight. it was soo sweet and loving. my fave verse was

    "Your touch gives me butterflies
    I long for the days that you hold me
    I cannot stand being away from you
    When I fall asleep its your face I see"

    maybe cos thats the way i feel about my boyfriend.. neway great job!! keep it up! 5/5 xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    Aa.....ww....ee...! thats cute... i have found mine yet cause the new generation screwed up the old generation so theres no more good men left. but thats a great poem i kno u wrote it from your heart... =)

  • 16 years ago

    by damont

    This is like a little song. but in its own sense a poem nice poem. it has a nice rythm. and im glad your happy. how did you meet?

  • 16 years ago

    by kimberly

    Good poem i liked it!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    Thats one of the many poems i've read that were cute and sweet. im happy you found something thats almost impossible to find. nice flow you really got the meaning out to me. great job. 5/5 !props!

  • 16 years ago

    by TheRapture03

    That was pretty great as well. It sounds lke this person means a great deal to you. This one had great imagery as well. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    This is another really sweet write, I really like the repetition on the first stanza. My favourite stanza without a doubt is:

    I've found my fairy-tale ending
    I feel like a princess when im with you
    When I was lonely, down, and sad
    You arrived to save me, right on cue

    Great rhyme and it really is so sweet, it's how every girl wants to feel =)

    Em xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by Kittens Poems

    Another awesome poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mackenzie

    Hey sista.... <3
    that was a wonderful poem i loved it! ilysm sis!

    5/5 my beautiful sis! haha

    ily,
    mackenzie

  • 16 years ago

    by Lance

    Love this poem:)
    hope you two are happy
    5/5