Domestic love.

by Just Jo   Jan 14, 2008


Physical pain or emotional, which one do you prefer?
I think physical at least then hes not with her.
a broken heart or a bruise? which one would be your choice.
I pick a bruise he has such a convincing voice.
Fear or loneliness, I'd rather it be fear.
he told me this way he'll always be here.
Apologies, or punches i no what he'd do.
But I'd rather block out the truth from me and from you.
Leave you or stay, i know which is easier.
I just can't stand the thought of you with her.
Honesty or lies, i know which i decided on
it's hard hiding the truth from you and from everyone.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sharon

    Great Poem. I too pick physical pain over emotional pain. I would die if i could just have the one i loved all to myself for a couple days. It'd make it all worth while

  • 16 years ago

    by Megan

    Well i dont think a capital "I" makes a poem...it was a great piece reguardless of the capitalization or the rhyme scheme..
    keep writing! i love your work

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Interesting and intense piece.
    I have a few suggestions: You should capitalize I in some places and revise the punctuation of the whole piece. The emotions in the whole poem are expressed in a good way. You did good job with rhymes, but they seem forced on some places.
    All in all, good job.
    Keep writing!

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