Razor

by briana   Jan 14, 2008


Razor,
sometimes i miss you
But you were such an issue
i miss your sharpness against my arm
After i was done with you
I wouldn't feel any harm
You gave me pain but took it away
I used you every single day
you slashed my skin
took out the pain within
But one Day i prayed
i realized this isn't the way
so i wiped you down
and since then
i haven't had a breakdown!

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  • 16 years ago

    by nina

    Talking to a razor ... brilliant idea
    you inspired me girl
    i liked it
    it was fine
    keep writing you got it

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexis

    ..
    amazing ...
    please, ...
    dont go back to it.
    it'll only hurt you in the end.
    I know you can keep strong ..
    I believe in you :D

    Amazing poem, by the way.
    5/5

    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by halie

    I loved it
    i feel the same way
    5/5
    great job
    and great poem
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Depressed

    Nice poem. That's good that you've stopped. I haven't cut in almost 15 weeks

  • 16 years ago

    by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost

    Very good emotion bery good wording too

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