by Tammie
This is a very different outcome to what I'd expect from the title, yet it is exactly what I'd expect. I can't explain what I mean there so that you'd understand easily but I love it. Aha, points for that to begin with. |
Very original. The simplicity of this poem highlighted greatly expressed emotions in the most outstanding ways. Beautiful piece of love poetry, filled with touching thoughts. It sounds so sincere, like it's written straight from the heart. I like the structure of the whole piece a lot, you created interesting flow from the beginning to the end. |
by Nix
Wow, just wow! Very few people can truly touch me with their love poems but this one is so beautiful. Ending is powerful! Amazingly done, this is so creative and unqiue piece. Wow, I am quite impressed. |
A very cute write. it was sweet and the ending was very touching and heartfelt. Something about this poem really gets to me, but in a good way, but im not sure, exactly, what it is. something outstanding about this poem. and i really like your structure. The beginning was very alluring. :] i like the repetition of the line "what is love" and the ending, the very last line, was simply beautiful. an amazing write. 5/5. |
by Sole
Nice write. The poem was good, flowing and simply intricate. |
by Blissful
Oh I just loved the ending! It was so simple yet held such an immense amount of meaning. The style you wrote in was different but one I truly enjoyed. I loved the passionate emotions you described because they were easy for me with relate with. Well done *5/5* |
I didnt really like the flow but thats just me personally. This was very heartfelt and emotional. |
by ABake
First, I love the title. I always wanted to use cliche in a title and I know now it really catches peoples eye. Anways- |
Aw you have such way with words when |
It maybe cliche, but thats exactly why its so beautiful. |