Comments : Defining silence

  • 16 years ago

    by Sirrah

    Great poem...keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Twistd StoRY

    Great poem.whoever it is needs to say its okay. :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by AJ

    Thanks for the comment, if a girl wrote this to me asking for forgiveness, i would give it to her... great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Wow, nice poem!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Baby i miss you and i love you beyond belief
    all i can do now is pray to the God above
    for your forgiveness for all this grief
    and for one last chance for me to prove my love

    ^^ Dear Tabi, it takes courage to put yourself in such a vulnerable position. I hope he forgave you. We all make mistakes, sweetheart. We are not God. If he loves you, then I think you have been forgiven already. I hope so:))
    Beautiful poem btw, a real good story too, straight for the heart:)

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid