by voodoo Jan 14, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
She's lying there in bed |
by Jenni
This poem has so much emotion in it, it's unbelievable, really touched me. I really liked the flow of it and the story was touching. Very well written, thanks for sharing. |
by Biya
Its a lovely poem ! I liked it voodoo :D |
by Therisa
This poem was really sad, but extremely good, it's full of emotion. I like it a lot |
by Jackie
Such a sad poem, great write though 5/5 |
by Bekka Smekka
This is amazing!! its so sad and so much pain!! great writing!! |