Love forever

by Jodie Phillips   Jan 14, 2008


I will always love you dearly
Always be right by your side,
Be there for you day and night
You fears I'm there to hide.

The bond we both share
One that I've never felt before,
A feeling of completion
No need to ask for more.

My soul mate I have found
I no we will stay together,
Each day I wake and smile
Knowing I've found a love that will last forever.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hidden1

    I wish that I could find my soul mate and that i can have someone who loves me as much as i love them. I'm so excited for you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Last line first stanza

    YOUR fears I'm there to hide. And make sure to use an apostrophe when saying I've and capitalize I. Last stanza second line use know not no.

    Okay now that I've gotten that out of the way. :) The reason I edited this one was because it was smaller. It was a good poem. I thought it to be odd that the first stanza had all rhyming lines and the second two didn't. It was a good poem though. Three.

  • 16 years ago

    by KATIE

    IT COULD OF BEEN BETTER IF YOU PUT YOURSELF INTO IT MORE..BUT IT WAS GOOD

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