by Jodie Phillips Jan 15, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
The day that we were told |
First on the structure it felt like the flow went a bit choppy in parts |
Awwwww..... what a beautiful and heartfelt poem. I am so sorry for your loss... Your poem is so nicely written, I'm sure Sam would love it and appreciate it.. Wonderful job with the poem hon |
This poem expressed such a deep, rough emotion. Well done. |
by Rodney Kirby
Very sweet |
Nice work, I could really feel the pain and sorrow in this poem, and you did an amazing job writing it. Here's my favorite part: |