This is a great poem very emotional
im getting choked up reading it
great job

Life and death is part of all of us, however it is terribly sad when we have to experience it before it is time. You did a great job with this poem and i love your outlook on the situation. i think alot of people would look at it in a more negative way. i love this poem!

This poem makes me think of a mother losing her child to cancer. my eyes are all watery it is truly a touching poem. you are a great writer and this poem was written very well with a lot of emotion. :DDD

I feel bad liking this poem. but its so good
but it is fill with so much pain you know what I mean? excellent piece

Wonderful. <3

Thats all I can really say. Its touchingly and painfully sad to know that this happens within our world Many times. But i agree it does make me think of a mother losing her child. But its honestly well written detailed wise bur i thought the flow was a little edgy. Other then that I Loved it. 5/5 Keep Writing!

-Ally
P.S- Thanks for your comment on my Poem "She's A Missing, Lost Cause"

I'm with the others - as soon as I read this poem it made me think of a Mother losing her child. I pray that this didn't happen to you and that you didn't have to go through this tragedy.

This poem is very emotion-filled and strong. I think your choice of words was excellent and the imagery was good too. As I could play the whole bedside scene out in my mind...brilliant.

Ally. x

It made me think of my daddy, ahhh the way u write seems a blessing!

This poem is great. Really gets to the reader. Awesome job. Sorry for the loss as well~

This is a beautiful piece of work, very sad but at the same time it shows true emotions of losing a loved one. Keep it up, it's excellent! :] 5/5

This is great!!!!!...i really liked it...
i'm so sorry u lost sam...
i love this poem!!..keep it up!!
**********aLy*****************

Wow that was awesome
keep it up
and I hope ur feeling okay
My prayers are with you
5/5
xx

Wow u made me cry !!!!

Wonderful emotional write. Great Job. 5/5

This was really good. I just wish there weren't mistakes in it. I have a knack for picking out typos. I just do. So when I read I find typos and they distract me from the poem. That's why I feel it's very important to have correct spelling, punctuation, capitalization, grammar, etc. Many people don't notice these things but it really does improve the poem. It was a great poem though. I give it a four.

" Until we meet again honey
Our love we will send to the heaven's above. "

dat ws very emotional and hearfelt... impressive work...
loved it...

Wow
that wuz a great poem,
that reminded me of my great grandma,
she died a couple years ago,
and i still remember going and visiting her,
i rlly miss her
but i know shes in heaven,
plus to make matters worse the day she died,
my cat, my mom had him 4 18 years, he wuz old, died the same day, well actually we had to put him to sleep
but
5/5
great poem

So beautiful and touching
everyone will die that's a fact but good ones always leave us footprinets that will never be forgotten

Meaningful expression for the most painful experience a person can face, especially a parent. This loss would devistate me.

This was really well written. Full of feeling and emotion. Very sad but in a beautiful way

Aw that had so much emotion it was lovely