-cough- though the rhyme was a bit shaky; i think it was preeety. nicely done, you little poet you. |
by Sandra
Bella, this is a really great poem. The message is really deep, and it flows. Good work!! 5/5 |
by Deana
To be honest I usually hate cuting poems but I have to say your rhymes and flow are really good ,I enjoyed it . |