Wow.. that was really good
i liked the repetition
great work keep it up!
Lisa:)

Love this song or poem whatever you make it, its amazing!!! if ever a guy like this existed near me....you'd hear about it on the news. lol great writing!!

Quite amazing yo :]
absolutleyy love that song/poemm!

Idnt finish commentingg, haha but i's touching<3