by Sweet Fragility Jan 15, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Flowing through my bloodstream silently, sweetly. |
You both did a great job each line came to life as the imaginary metaphor of the poison expressed intense emotion |
by Jason Meres
A perfectly assembled piece, everything in balance. Insightful repetition that works with every line as ever good repeated line should. I feel this is just what I needed to read tonight. |
by she
Very good poem |
by Spirit
Sometimes when two people write something you can tell. I couldn't |
WOW!!!This was superb!!!the ryhming was really good!! and excellent choice of words!! |