I really like this. its really good. ur talented. also i think its a typo u said waist its supposed to be waste anyway keep writing and please comment one of my poems.

I loved thius. i liked the writing style you did for it also. it had a nice flow and it's something i can relate to. you did an excellent job at expressing yourself.

You know I'm tender.
So wheres the rest of your love?

i liked those lines alott. they were the most creative. they held the most meaning for me. this poem touched me, job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.