by x.Athame.x Jan 15, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
love is
Creaking stairs linger on the breeze |
Great idea for a poem. I love the format too: specifically the added lines in brackets. It creates a break in the poem to illustrate the change in setting and at the end of the poem to bring the message of the poem together in one line. At least thats how i saw it. Good write. |