Wow... simply amazing. It was short, but you definitely got your point across. I can totally relate to this piece, I couldn't stop thinking about my boyfriend Tyler whenever I read this poem. Great job, keep it up darling. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

OMFG!! this poem is so emotional and deep! i loved it, kiddo. total awsomeness-ness! 5/5 you should definitely keep writing like this

xD Happy Thoughts xD
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~