Absolutely wonderful read, baby girl. Great flow in it too and very relatable for me. I really like the last stanza...
Demons can laugh and God can cry out in pain,
but I'll still sit there in loneliness, edging insane.
My mind may fight back the tears I shall cry,
yet I'll never forget you somehow made me try.
A stupendous write. a very relateable poem
to many, i would say, especially me. :] the
title itself deserves a 5/5.! lol. the flow was
really flawless and the rhyme was perfect.
my favorite stanzas were the first and last.
simply.. an unbelievably incredible poem! 5/5.