by Hollow Emotion Jan 15, 2008
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
A friend |
by Obscura
This is a really good poem the structure is great within it i liked the similes in it it really outlined the close bond of friendship between two people strange choice of words though but strange does not mean bad the rythem is good aswell but you do not have any periods in it or capital letters except at the start but other than that well done |
by Nobodys Hero
This poem is very sweet and very much true =] Everyone likes to have close friends and im sure this is how most people feel about them - Great job! |