The end of us = The end of me.

by aFiReInSiDe   Jan 15, 2008


As days grow,
my memories of you get slower.
I miss you more than I can explain.
I cannot handle this pain.
We need to be together, forever.
We were meant to be,
Why cant you see?
This is killing me, slowly, tourchouring me,
breath by breath.
Why cant we last?
Hopefully I will not feel this deadly blast.....

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  • 16 years ago

    by aFiReInSiDe

    Oh thank you so much :) im glad some one finally wrote. And thank you for pointing out my mistakes I will fix it right away, I will definatley read your work.

  • 16 years ago

    by KJ

    Very good poem =D
    I noticed u didnt have any ratings so I decided to be the first! This is a very good poem showing great emotion. I think that emotion is very important in order for a poem to really mean something. So good job in that =)
    I just noticed two errors: handeld* should be handled* and tourhered* should be tortured*
    Other than over all perfectly written
    5/5

    PrElUde 2 A KiSs

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